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by Extraho

schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. I think I like the skipping of the school years with just the references back to them. I love all the changes you've made. I love that Harry's a wolf, that he's shagging his aunt and the mailman and the cop... Who isn't he shagging? Vernon and Dudley obviously. Are they the only ones? Probably. I love the clubs idea. I wish I could go to one. I know what it feels like to have clueless friends at school. It's questions like that that make me want to slap them. But my friends aren't supposed to know these things, so I don't feel too bad. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens now that the glamours are off! ~dpa06~
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy shite! You were beyond right! This is nothing like what I've ever read in a Fenrir/Harry fic. Harry's the dom in the relationship? Fenrir was a virgin? That's just... amazing! I love it. The fight, the club, the attack. I love that Harry and Sirius are together, you know like friends? I'm glad that he could still be friends with his godfather. I like this. I can't wait to find out what all Lucius and Draco will say to this developement. What an amazing fic. I love it to pieces. ~dpa06~
person buttplug
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loving it can't wait for the updates
person sanda
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person alma
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person alma
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
person Bastian
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have never read a FenrirxHarry where Harry was the dominant. Normally I like this pairing because Fenrir is so dominant, but the way you painted Fenrir to be more femalish I guess I can kind of see it but it would help to see Harry with a bit more dominating role as well. Even though this isn't my normal cup of tea I still liked it and hope you continue to update it. But if Fenrir mentioned that Harry was a packmates cub does he mean Remus? And if it is Remus if they are packmates wouldn't that make Harry not his enemy? Just a little confused there I could have just read the whole thing completely wrong. Anyway good chappy update soon!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot. Oh and younger Fenrir...very yummy!!!
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please put up the third chapter its a very good story
schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it so far. Please update soon!