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by Extraho

schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, sadness. Harry's got it bad for Fenrir. And Fenrir definitely has it for Harry. He's the Alpha of the pack and he can't even lay in a field without thinking of his wonderful one-time stand (literally) in the alleyway. And Draco! I want to know who Draco's got it bad for. He wants this mystery guy so much that he's the bottom in the relationship. That shocked Harry, AND me. Of course, Harry and Fenrir shocked me too. I love the major changes from anything else ever written that you've put in here. They're amazing, just like your writing. Keep it up. ~dpa06~
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole story so far. I love it!! Please update soon!
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooh, ooh is it remus!?! i bet it is!!! hmmmm, or maybe sirius. but i'm goin with remus. and draco's up the duff. so is fenrir. hehe, i love it, you have to feed me some more!!!!! pulease!!!! i'll be good, promise!! more more more!!!!!
person Bastian
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh who is Draco seeing? And when is Fen going to me Harry again? Update soon plz!
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha....Draco is preggers.
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooohh! that was the part i've been looking forward to. fenrir's the bottom, i suspected it, but wow! you made it really good.

what?! why would you let him walk away harry? thats not right, go and kidnap him! hehe

love it ^^
person alma
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am being a good review....I really liked it!! But why is Harry letting him walk away?!?!?! Harry needs to get him back quickly! Update soon please!
person Wilder
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! i love it! that is absolutely NOT what i expected, it is so much better! :glomp: Uke!Fenrir was HOT, who woulda thunk it? well obviously you and Harry... i can't wait to see where this goes... do i detect the subtle hint of mpreg? *squee*
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. What an amazing intro. I can guarantee there's no way I've read a Fenrir/Harry like this before. I want to know how they meet, how they get together, what Lucius and Bella and Rodolphus are going to say about all of this. How he's going to play Ron and Hermione, and still hang out with Draco all the time. Holidays? Oh, I have so many questions. Questions I'm sure will be answered in the coming chapters. I must get to reading. GREAT start! ~dpa06~