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by Extraho

schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahaha....I enjoyed that.
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have not laughed this hard in a long time. Thank you for that!!!
Can't wait to see what happens next.
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ROCK ON...that had to been the best death seen ever *nodding* well it was quick but i love it all the same.. kudos to you
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
13 seconds?!! whoaa!! that was very fast.

i want to read more, please update soon ^-^
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well thank you dear cousins boyfriend :) And I hope you will be updating soon :) It was hell this week because you didnt update x.x I know you were gone but still I hoped you would update this story sooner. This my most favourite story at this time. Propably the only one that I like right now. So keep it up :)
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aha...only 13 seconds. At least Fenrir knows he is protected.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First, that was amazing. I loved that Harry found all these different things out and has set them to rights. I'm sad that he doesn't think he can trust Remus (with good resons, I know) since Remus has always been my favourite character ever. I can't wait to see what Dumbledore has to say about the lack of money, lack of control, and lack of marriage between Harry and Ginny. That will be amazing.

Second, have fun at your dad's. I know I'd love to see my dad for any amount of time. College can be a bitch sometimes...

Third, that teaser is just plain mean! I think it's Silverrage, since that's who was pissed when he came upon Harry and Fenrir nesting together. It said he'd lusted after Fenrir for a while now, and that he wasn't going to let anyone take him away from him. If it is Silverrage, he's going to die a painful death. Harry's his Alpha's mate, THE Alpha Dom, Harry Potter, and the Lord of his Almoighty Wolf Universe. Anyways. This was great. Have fun and come home with another awesome chapter.

~pyro~
person sanda
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Mino
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, you cruel person, a whole week without your lovely updates
*sheds a tear* ah well, you'll just have to have lot's of fun and
come back refreshed and ready to write, so enjoy your trip
update as soon as your back and keep up the good work
*throws you two magic cookies* an extra for the road
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love your story!!! I like this Harry(Logan) alpha Fenir sub. I would also like to know who is the father of Dracos baby. I personally would like it to be Severus or even Voldemort. But it should be someone older then him. I have a question is Dray Narcissas son, or is he from a male pregnancy??? Hope you will update sooner then in week.