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by Extraho

schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg youre such a bitch. that was so mean. i hate cliffies. update soon! ill give you a beer! or cookies.. whatever just update the friggin story.
person toads70
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing chapters!! i can't wait for the next one...hope draco's baby is okay
person sanda
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
"Damn those beaters"? No. Damn that author! *groans loudly* Why, why?! He can't lose the baby. Oh! Does this mean I get to learn who the mate is soon? I can't wait for something like that. But honestly: playing Quidditch when you're preggers? Not smart! In the rain no less. I swear. If he and his baby survive this, and they better, Harry needs to ground his brother. No flying. In fact, if Harry and Lucius and Draco's lover don't ground him, I will. No more flying, period! And definitely no Quidditch! I mean, come on! ~dpa06~
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is draco going to miscarry?! Noooo!!!

And who is the other father? I reaallly want to know

Fenrir? Where's Fenrir?

You have to update soon!
person kcgx23
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous chapter, I love the story.
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dear god....I hope the baby's okay.
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really suck... your chapters arent that long and you leave us with a cliffy ... GRRR I WANT MORE AND I HOPE YOU WILL UPDATE SOON!!!

Yet I have a question... Lucius knows that Harry is Logan? No reaction from him? No "why are you a friend of Harry Potter?"
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dumbarse Silverrage. Well, at least the whole pack now knows that Fenrir is Harry's, and that if they touch him or so much look at him the wrong way that Harry will kill them. Instantly. Mercilessly. There will be no tolerance when it comes to Harry's mate and pup. Nope, none. I like that. Harry is possessive, but for a reason and he can back it up. Sweet! ~dpa06~
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter! I love these meetings with Ginny and the Weasleys. It's just one more time I get to see/read about Harry telling them to fuck off. It's great. I can't wait until they find out about Harry's parentage and who's he's married/mated to, and the pup he's expecting. It will be great! ~dpa06~