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by Extraho

person applesauce_N_soysauce
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
~~~falls over chair~~~ I moved.
I love the way you had LM tell that tale.
Wonderfully done.
Cant wait to read more.
person Guderian
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I would love to be on the mailing list. And as for the happy ending... should there be any other kind?
person Guderian
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to add my email address, StarcraftCoolest@aol.com
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ooher! This was one of the best chapters, I do believe. I loved the story. I loved this entire history you put into for our benefit, as well as Voldemort's and Bellatrix's. I mean, it's a great way to do it without boring the readers with backstory. Perfect! (Mind if I possibly borrow that idea for a story or two of my own?) And Logan (as I keep forgetting to call him) now has an audience with Voldemort, the Death Eaters, and several pack leaders who have openly said they'd rather side with Logan and be tortured by Voldemort than side with Voldemort and be tortured by the Mother Moon. Oh, so amazing! I loved it, honestly. And that's all I can really say about this chapter. It was amazing! ~dpa06~
person Ladyroo88
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!! What will happen when bellatrix meets harry?!?! will the dark lord accept him?? Is greyback going to be okay alone in the hospital? Please post more!!!!! put me on the mailing list PLEASE !!!
person kallipso
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter I can't wait to read more.
person ale
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM

i love this story....but i have a quesxtion....does bellatrix know of harry?

please email me when you update...

slytheringirl89@hotmail.com
person Blood Dragon
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great story. If you could email me with an update I'd be grateful.
person Treetop
schedule January 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
sorry, didn't realize that I wasn't signed in.
person Katonie
schedule January 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
They are SO adorable! And Twins! Who woulda thought?...well, you I guess...anyway, please update again soon.

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie