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schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I want to be on the mailing list!!!!! This is brilliant!!! mod2682@yahoo.com ::MV::
person Mizzwhip
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you have my attention! What happened to the rings? Please finish the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So yeah, that was extremely short. But it was still packed full. I mean, come on! I want to know what happens with Fenrir and the rest of the pack. And what really happened with Draco's birth. If the Parseltongue isn't Malfoy and isn't Black, where did Draco get it from? And Voldemort doesn't know about it either, so this is a hell of a secret. That Harry is Voldemort's grandson is amazing. Did he ever know Bella was preggers? Was he upset that his grandson was snatched before they got a chance to know him? I would have gone psycho and started killing people as well, personally. And you can be sure I will continue to review. I will feed your muse, because I know how important reviews are to a writer. I hate when it says my fic's been read a bazillion and two times, but only has 30 reviews or something like that. I will continue to review, I promise. Thanks for e-mailing me! It made my Economics class SO much more bearable! LOLz! ~dpa06~
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!!! and then........?
more please!!
schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I like the last chappie.. that was great ^_^

Ja ne
person Kaarsten
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Add me to the list, please!

kaarsten.grey.fang@gmail.com
person Rokkis!
schedule January 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Finally, all is revealed! That was a great chapter, but you're so very mean! can't believe you left it as a cliffie!!
Will Bella be claiming him! Can't see her as the maternal type, but then again her son was stolen from her! Hope there will be some lovely torture scenes and such in the near future. Harry really needs his revenge! *laughs a bit manically*
Good chappie!!

Cheers!
person Mizzwhip
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is getting better and better. One question, where is Fenrir's rings?
person barbara
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
update more pretty please update more
person Jan
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe you left it there! Please update chapter 19 soon, along with chapter 20, please. ^_^