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by Extraho

person sneakysgirl
schedule March 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG. I LOVE IT. CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE.
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always.
person Hajime
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok i'm adapting to the harry dom thingy ...its a nice story but can i point out that...THEY ARE WEREWOLVES AND SILVER HAS THE ABILITY TO KILL THEM THROUGH SILVER POISONING???!!!!!
person Jan
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was.... let me see how to put it.... hilarious(when Tom jumped Lucius in front of everyone in the meeting), Sweet and Hot(When in the bedroom), and Great/embarrassing(for L/V that is!) or once again hilarious(for everyone on the floor below. (when everyone in the meeting, hear everything that was going on in the bed room, and could see that Voldemort isn't the enemy they thought him to be, but Albus is.)

Please update chapter 23 soon ^_^

Jan
person Matt
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More Harry/Fenrir, less everyone else.
person Faschmer
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun...
person Rokkis
schedule March 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! God! That was a long time waiting!
But I must admit that this chapter, more than made up for it!
Could hear every moan Luc made and every slap of flesh! Also enjoyed the fact that they were interrupted at a meeting, with the very positive result of making the Dark Lord more human. Wonder how their son will take the news? *smirk*
Gladly looking forward to the next chapter, and will try to read your stories at FF . net as well:)

Cheers!
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you just made English infinitely more enjoyable. That was amazing! I loved it! I loved that he just walked into that meeting and practically mauled Lucius. He didn't care that there was anyone else in the room; I don't even think he realized that there was anyone else in the room. And who's the lewzer who was questioning Lucius' alliances? I thought he made them pretty darn clear. Whatev. This was amazing, and I loved it, and you should write more, and I love it! But we need some more Harry/Fenrir. It's been a while since I saw the word Fenrir written anywhere... ~dpa06~
schedule March 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my soo hot!! but what about fenrir!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yah!! ff.net account I'll look you up!!!
Kisses
Ladyroo
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
you have got to update soon! i need to know what's going to happen!!!!

pleaseee update soon