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by Extraho

person Rokkis
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This I think is the first fanfic that I have actually enjoyed a Rita Skeeter expos
person kyona kopper
schedule April 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oy! I love it! And I definitely want to be put on the mailing list, just add aol to my penname. That way the notice will go straight to my cell phone. Ja ne
person Memphis Atari
schedule March 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i think you need a beta.. or get a better beta.. i'm starting to notice some grammatical problems that are starting to bug me.. but i really really like this story. kind of find it weird how you've had Vernon being a bastard to a nice guy.
person Jan
schedule March 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Their so cute with their brotherly antics ^_^{hehehe)

I sure don't blame them for being confuse. Especially Harry, What should he call Draco, Brother or Uncle? and of coarse we can't leave Tom behind, should he call him Grandpa or Stepdad?
Wow, what a family.

They sure like to keep it in the family.

Please update chapter 24 soon. ^_^

Jan
person Rokkis
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah man! That IS weird! Can't wait for THAT family reunion!
Looking forward to the upcoming talking-out! All the cards laid bare!!
Update again soooooon please!!! Pretty please with Bertie Blotts Every Flavoured Beans on top!!

Cheers!
schedule March 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great chappie!! more more!!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No no, hugs and cookies for you! I love this fic. I can understand about the writer's block however. My muses like to take frequent vacations and leave me hanging. Stupid muses... You're doing great though. I just wanna know what happens to Fenrir! You've kinda taken the focus off of his and Harry and their cubs, even though I wanna know what happens with Lucius and Tom, and Sirius and Draco, and Severus and Petunia (and isn't that just weird?!). Oh, you have so much going on at one time. I love it! More hugs, more cookies, more beverage-of-choice. ~dpa06~
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Absolutely love it!!! I have been sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for an upload!!
Please do so again soon!!!!!!!
schedule March 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love cookies!! More please!! I like the whole twist family everyone is related to everyonelse!! I love it More!
person Izabella
schedule March 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey,
I love this story!
I would love it if you would email me when you update, cause I'm a diligent reader and checker of my email, but not a checker of my Fanfiction sights! LOL!

BUT GREAT STORY btw!
Izzy.