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by Extraho

person Doodle_Penguin
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love the update! cant wait for the next chapter!
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I didn't think about Sirius! Holy shite! I was thinking the Dark Lord in his new form, but not Sirius. That is so beyond perfect! Harry, er Logan, isn't there to protect Draco and thus he gets shoved into a wall. Damn you all! Then, who steps in but the new DADA professor and DRACO'S HUSBAND/FATHER OF HIS CHILD!!! OMG, I love it and I love this fic and I think I might love you. In a severly platonic writer/reader relationship type of way. My boyfriend's a rather jealous sort. *shrugs* Oh well.

To the reviewer who flamed you because this is a slash story, they're an idiot. Come on! The only way to find this story is to read your other stuff (which, granted, is not all M/M but is still all clearly labeled somewhere if it is) or through the Harry/Fenrir subsection of the Harry Potter category (which is obviously M/M). So, they're stupid. And just plain dumb. It's the 21st century. We don't discriminate on gender or race or religion (for the most part) anymore; why should we discriminate on sexual orientation? So stick that in your juice box and suck it.

I love your stuff, and will be a loyal reviewer until you stop writing or I stop reading. So please, continue your marvelous work. ~dpa06~
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story. I agree people should use their common sense.
Now for Extraho Please update soon.
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh!! sirius is the dada teacher oh!! you just too hyper now!! i need to know more!!
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
someone have got to do something about Rita Skeeter, too annoying!

oh yes! sirius black is here! i didn't think it was him as DADA teacher, well a surprise that i like, hehe

but that was abit short though, so i hope you update really soon cuz i wanna know what sirius gonna do, revenge for draco maybe? or something fun to do with gryffindors *evil laughs*

more pleaassee!!
person Rhea Bleu
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Have just been reading this story i have to say that i have fell in love with it. It has all of my quirky likes that i love to find in fanfiction and i enjoy reading it immensley. Just a request, could the chapters be slighty longer??? I love reading ff and the more the better. Either way it is a great read and i look forward to the next chapter
xx signing out. Rhea Bleu.
schedule April 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn that woman! I want to bash her face in, then force her into her animagus form so I can spray her with bugspray, stomp on her, and then beat her remains with a fly swatter to be sure she's dead. *growl* She's so annoying! I thought it was funny that everyone thought Harry and Draco were married, and Draco was having Harry's baby. That was hilarious! But no, Rita Skeeter had to go and ruin it... Stupid bug lady... I want ot know who the Defence teacher will be. Lucius? The new Tom? Random Guy Q? Sorry, I tend to get a bit random when I'm hungry. I was happy that Draco and Harry seemed to accept Lucius and Tom together, despite the slightly disturbing family mix-ups with step-father/grandfather/whatever. Oi, my head hruts now. Anywho! This was amazing. Take your time in writing more, because I personally understand the lack of muses. Mine take frequent, LONG vacations. Take your time, and the writing will be that much better because of it. ~dpa06~
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Totally awesome story - I want some more please
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love it!! Serectly evil sirus Preggers draco!! More PLEASE!!
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love it, Love it, Love it!!
I Have been on tenter hooks waiting for an update.