rate_review Reviews

Hi! I've just spent about 3 hours reading Alphas and I love it. I hope you update soon. Could you possibly add me to your update list if you have one? I'm not good at giving critisisms but I can tell you how much I enjoy your work. Hope to hear from you soon.

OOOO burn. I love the last line of the story proper. Mohr please. :P Good work. Interesting premise, I don't think I have seen this particular explanation for Harry's parseltongue anywhere.

I love your writing, you are truly talented. This is not idle flattery I do not give compliments out unless they are well deserved. There are a few small grammar mistakes and one or two sentences are hard to understand, but all in all it is one of the better Harry/Fenrir stories. I love the plot, very original. With that I must go because i have stayed up all night reading this beautiful story. Please continue. I love mpreg and eagerly await the birth of the twins.

I love this story so Please up date.

YAY SIRIUS! *clings to* Rita... I hate that woman, irritating bug >.<. But Again ya for Sirius, and delightfully evil sounding. I can't wait to see more of one of my fav HP Charas. Can't wait for the next update!

Bravo ^^ i feel sad whenever i see reviews like this (ones that diss the pairings and/or the slashiness of stories) Keep an open mind people! it's the 21st Century! homosexual marriage is legal! (and if you want even more proof that it's normal: it was common in Ancient Athens and Rome! so meh! and look at Plato's Symposium - particularly Aristophanies's speech on love)
ANYWAYS! sorry to go all historical on you :P i really don't like people who flame a story someone else worked so hard on just because they didn't like the pairing or are homophobic....

I LOVE THE ENDING (of the chapter, if you tell me this is actually the end of the story i will send a missile to your house and blow you to smithereens :P)
It's an evil cliffhanger though T_T and so Sirius makes an appearance (FINALLY!)! definitely looking forward to all those wonderful pranks that he has planned on unsuspecting griffindors (and of course, professor bumblebee). i love the last line where Siri introduces himself! so dramatic :D
Although, him appearing from the rafters made me think of a certain bat of the dungeons :D

i love how your story is turning out ^^ at first i was a little weary of it, i'm not a great fan of dom-harry (although i don't mind reading dom-harry stories, in my mind he will always be a sub :D) Your beginning few chapters needs a little work though, just a little more detail here and there... his relationship with the Dursleys seemed a little weird to me, but i guess i'm used to the dursleys being pathetic and spiteful ^^

Keep up the good work!! Definitely looking forward to the next chapter so update soon!!

~Dark Illusions

so short...too short...i need my harry/fenrir fix...and my draco/sirius fix...damnit i need my slash fix...please update soon...HAPPY WRITING/READING!!! :-D!!!

god just loved this chapter, you are an amazing writer, keep it up

Hehehe, welcome to hell!! Sirius purred with glee!
That is so wicked!!

Cheers!

hmm me thinks a wicked streak is a foot.. can't wait for the next update. thanks so much i love reading this fic...