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for Wanna Be Your Girlfriend

by thrnbrooke

person Nikte
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You really got me thinking, what is really going on? I can't wait for next chapter, will the penmanship on the letters reveal Draco that Harry and Jaime are the same person? What happened between them? Why is Harry so hurt towards Draco? So many questions!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! Thank you for the chocolate and here goes a bouquet of roses for you xoxo
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have been waiting to read more on this story for a while now, and you didn't disappoint me. Keep up the fantastic work.

Kat
schedule October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! I've been anxiously waiting for an update!
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like how you are developing this fic. the characters and their lives are coming together in a natural seeming manner. i'm still a little confused about some of the story but i feel confident that you will address all those confusing bits as the story continues. the later chapters seem like you rushed the editing a bit; some sentences are awkward and there are some punctuation and spelling errors. overall its an interesting story that i've enjoyed reading and i look forward to reading more.
person Rettavex
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm intrigued by this tale. More please...
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good
person NightLo
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well....is the island warded against friends? Would Draco accidentally show up? Or will Draco find out more about Harry's incident?

Actually I would love the idea that...Draco sticks to find out Harry, and Harry tells him the truth...
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeah!
person Danine
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the chocolate! I'll take it!! Excellent chapter, leaves me dying for more!!
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I just want to hit Draco upside the head and say Duh! Grr the signs are all there I wish he would pick up on them. Did dean do something that caused them to miss each other on the dates? Thats what I am thinking, anyway I look forward to more.