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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh golly keep writing!
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
niceeeely done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Never mind counting, you can write and that's what matters. The story is excellent, and sorry I was the only one to notice the tiny error!!
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September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good sofar. I don't know if I've ever read another first person perspective story, but you do it really well. Can't wait for the next chapter :)
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting possibilities. And it doesn't need a grammatical beta.
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start up date soon!!!
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September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like it I want ot see where this is going please update!
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hiya the story's fine and everything but you've put six words and it's five you might wanna change it before the dreaded flamers come!! very intriguing hope you update soon!!
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more please!