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for Whoremione

by eelljawa

person eelljawa
schedule August 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
,,,
person luvhp
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
cute little story, although she lost her virginity to Fred in Ch. 1 but in Ch. 2 it says George.
???
person hottie
schedule January 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
its a good start to an interesting story, but in the first chapter it says she lost her virginity to fred and in the second chapter it says she lost it to george. Just thought id let you know
person eelljawa
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol
person Hermyone
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it's that bad, hope you continue.
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you can't write, stop embarassing yourself