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poor sucker now he gets to go through the joys of being a blimp

I have read that regular sexual activity (err, with your partner) is the best way to keep a marriage humming along and happy. I hope it works for them. Harry is so stubborn and hurt that I don't think he sees that yet.

OK, we are looking at the base word "gravid"... Oh dear Gods!! Poor Severus.

finally some Sev on Harry action! thou not very detailed LOL *drool*
ahaha Sev actually crawled arouund? that's quite hilarious n unthinkable at the same time
oh n thx for answerin my question. i guess if Jack could borrow from Harry, Lucius wouldn't be evil >:P
i was a tad worried bout the title being "Divorce"
but i'm glad they hafta stay together for at least 3 years.
it'd give time for their feelings to surface! >v<
oh Croft n Dan are so cute! i'd love to see some family scenes again.
if only the chapters were a bit longer! T^T

good luck with new story plottin =]
n the muddy team activities!? @_@

to become heavy, to become burden, to become pregnant, oh I do so wounder what is going to hapen in the next chapter... Great story, Im enjoying the plot line and how you write the story and am looking forward to Harry opening himself up to some subbsantial feelings for severus.

oh man! i can't wait for an update! please send me an email when you do please. great story i really like the way you don't forget about the kids or send them off to someone's house, some stories that i've read the couple would have kids but then you don't seem to read much about them interacting with them much past that point.

Poor Harry ! Thatw as alot to take in the space of a chapter! I like the name Daniel! *sniggers* Let's hope life becomes somewhat normal for Harry and Severusnow. Maybe they can even learn to love each other!

ooooooooooh i was just screaming "i knew it" the whole time.
i knew i wouldn't get my wish to see Draco w/ another hot guy v__v
i expected him to be with Jack, since u omitted his name when Jack was showin him the paper, i think it was the paper at least.
when Sev wasn't the one, i knew it'd be Lucius messing with the meds.
but awww Lucius is dead.... oh well, on with the story XP
thou his death was a bit anti-climatic i guess
but couldn't Jack ask Harry for the money? esp since he got back in touch w/ the goblins privately
hmmm will there be some family life scenes coming up?
i can't wait to see Severus n Harry bicker, then make up =P
oh where will Harry n his babies be living now?
i'm excited to see how the next 10+ chapters will go
*rubs paws together*

this is a great story can't wait for the update.

oooh i just love your fic! seriously! so much angst!
knowing there are more finished chapters makes me very happy n relieved.
all 10 chapters so far have been great.
might be a tad short, but the story/plot is progressing at a very good speed.
darn, will i hate Lucius by the end? cuz i'm wantin to punch him in his gut already ^^''''
man if i could slap Severus when he said all those mean things...
i know i know, he's regrettin it now, but that was just mean.
oh n i must say those extra vials are definitely from Sev!
he must've know. oh the heart-clench-momoents!
althou, Harry could've been smarter with his disguising of his scar.
the mind blocking thou.. dun think he had a chance against the levels of ex-Death Eaters v___v
i wish you could upload faster. usually i won't ask this of writers.
but i dun want to forget to read this great fic. especially once real life starts kickin my ass again.
but anyway, there are my thoughts on this wonderful story.
can't wait until the next chapter. take care~