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for The Deflowering of Draco Malfoy

by princesspeach

schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about your boyf but just to let you know, with having such a 'bad boy' (honestly!!!!) husband I have to put up with some killer mood swing's!!!lol!!! I am so!!! glad you decided to continue, poor Hermione I hope Draco makes it up to her real soon ;)
person luvhp
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha, loved it! Great job in just two hours in the middle of the night.

Thanks for the review as well and no problem waiting on Repercussions. I was going to nudge you but you left that wonderful note, so thank you. If you need someone to bounce ideas off of, I'm more than happy to help in any way I can. I am going through the same thing with C,C & C. When I'm at home with no 'puter I have all these wonderful ideas, but then I get to work and forget them all, or how I'm going to get to that point. But, I'm working on them all week as bosses are in Europe :)
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you were right it was very OOC but one of the best ive read i think, i dont know if it was meant to be a one shot or not, but i think it could make a good story maybe about the whole year, or perhaps there could be another that runs along side, or perhaps just a series of one shots... lol, in conclusion, very well written i think, the humor isnt forced or anything.
person Jen
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
continue!! please!! ^-^
person Extraho
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it. draco is a natual at everything he does. how about a sequel were moine find out that after him she cant be satisfied by anyone else- clishe, i know.
person ichiruki
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dayum that was hot! I must know what #8 is lol. Does it have to with Malfoy???
person Avanell
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it was great to have the old broken record story done with a twist of the characters. Nice job! Check indeed!!!
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh please continue! it's really good having them switch roles for a change and I can't wait to see what is number eight on her list! Very hot and I hope you will be posting soon.
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was kinda shocking seeing (so to speak), Draco as a bookworm but highly erotic as well cause he is super sexy and to dominate someone like that to me, would be amazing. of course I think my hubby is gorge but he's a bad boy so he dominate's me more than me him, I would like to see you continue their was some major sparks between them and I want to know what she has planned for the rest of the list and what will happen to Harry and Ron.
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not bad!

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