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for The Deflowering of Draco Malfoy

by princesspeach

person Anon
schedule July 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
noooo why would you leave it like that!! i freaking love this story, you are indeed a talented writer... please continue but no more cliffies, i think ile go mad.
person PotterEntourage
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you asked for it! Draco should continue to please Hermione wth everything but his Slytherin "assets"! I believe this would be his first foray into GIVING oral pleasure? He could become addicted to the taste and her reactions. He's already a little cocky, so that could work, and when he's done with his tease, and she's boneless and sated, he should hit it fom the back baby! Boo-Ya! (Nott rocks!) Crabbe and Goyle are the best, hilarious and well written chapter! Welcome back!
person ichi.ruki
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! I was going to go with the magic weed in TPB fic, but you beat me to it! I think I like how yours turned out much much better. It was really funny, and poor sexually frustrated Draco and Hermione, he should really just shag her, lol! (*winks suggestively like this ;) *)
person Anon
schedule June 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh where to start?? I love the orginality of the story, I love the way you play with the characters. Crabb and Goyle as stoners. LMAO OMG that was so funny. I love Pansy's character - I knew a girl in high school like that! I never could understand how the guys seemed to fall for it but whatever. This is brilliant. Please keep it going. I want to know exactly how Draco is going to PUNISH Hermione. And yeah, she does deserve it - just a bit. LOL
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i love this fic... i am also reading repercussions tho aswell and was very happy to see it updated recently... keep this up i love how everyone seems to have swapped personalities... i think pansy is my fave, i cant wait to see how this one turns out deffo keep it up
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved, loved, loved it!!!! Now this is a Hermione I can root for! No tears, just raw! Reminds me of a character I'm working on for my own Draco-centric story! Brilliant!
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please continue this wonderfully, refreshingly different Dramione fic! Don't let one idiot who doesn't understand the point of fanfic or the definition of OOC stop you and ruin it for the rest of us. Most Dramione fics, even the good ones, follow the same formula. Not that I'm complaining, its my favorite ship. But I love your take on it! This is great and very sexy. You rock!
schedule November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters 1 to 3

I found myself chuckling various times thoughout this fic. =D
I love Hermione appearing naked, at all times, to Draco causing him to question his sanity. Very naughty! LOL ;-D
schedule November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter one

OMG, the scene between Hermione and Draco was so incredibly sexy!!!

;-D