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for A Determined Frame of Mind

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh no!!! No!!! I sooo need chapter 18!
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yikes! I hope that Draco did keep extra notes as always. Please? Please? Please?

If he didn't, maybe the fact that Batty is gone and the announcement he made regarding Potter being treated as a member of the Malfoy family will help. And of course, Harry's clothes will still be at the Manor as well. Yeah, there are lots of clues Scrimmy wouldn't be able to get rid of. (I hope)
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you
person Kaspjo
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am so angry after reading this chapter. As I was reading this chapter I was thinking about how "Unprotected" Draco had allowed himself to become. Someone who has been around bad people his entire life should have been much more weary of who he trusted. I only wonder now if Lila becomes involved somehow, because she's the only one who knows Harry's plight at this point.

The Minister is someone I dearly wish to suffer greatly and if Harry were to go dark and kill him, I might not mind that either.
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
im trying really hard not to be mad, bcuz this is all part of the story. i feel sorry for both of them. and i truly hate backstabbers like eugenie, no matter how regretful she may be. will draco get revenge for her betrayal in the end?
person Silks (you send me updates under blacksilkenkitty(
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh... I... well, now that this chapter is over I'm a step away from killing you. I'm so glad now that I have a week of or I'd be angsting overthis and wouldn't be able to write exams or any of the sort.
I'm sorry if I haven't reviewed either for as long as this, but... well, things have prevented me from that.
Yours Silks
person purple-er
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hi,

i'm totally guilty for not reviewing earlier, but better late than never, right?
I really like the way you've developed the characters, its one of the few believable fanfics left around here...
and you've even written a sequel and continued updating...woww.
I hope that was encouraging enough, but if that isn't then, keep it up, really.
person Chris
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PURRRRRRFECT!!! I love it... gggrrrrr!
person McAbacus
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
_the sky-look, the sun-look, the storm-look_

0_o I almost *died* from overwhelming *rightness*, that was the most perfect description and I think it worked on so many levels. I actually went back and read that little bit again a few times, just because I loved it so much. -rant and rave-

I look forward to Draco Psyche-diving, should be a treat! And of course, the only thing better than Harry and Draco having sex is them saying 'I love you'. It's like every chapter you can feel their relationship becoming almost tangibly stronger, can almost see it all interweaving; the emotions, the physical and their 'working' relationship too. I really feel now that I'm reading about a couple who would do almost anything for each other and it gives me shivers down my spine to think what they can do together.

And nice little justice/vengance scene; Harry and Draco and their morals are always interesting when you pair them together and I enjoy the influence each has on the others views in this fic.
person bthatcher2002
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story.how many chapters do you think will be in this story.i just can't see haay's old freindships to be the same again.i know that the curse would kick in when harry was with his friends or ginny,but when said friends were alone didn't they tried to see that something was not right.draco finally figured it out and he wasn't even friends with harry.great story.