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for A Determined Frame of Mind

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Spoiled, spoiled, spoiled... That is what your readers are. ^_^

And man do I like being spoiled, especially with good writing. In a way I'm regretting the end, cuz that means I have to wait for a new story full of intricate plot twists like this one.
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
HOLY MOLY! You just blew me away! OMG!!! I soooo need chapter 22!
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 21! What are they going to do with the man?
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! That was so wonderfully intense! Great job.
person Tu
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
FABULOUS CHAPTER! I can't wait to see what happens next! What plans does Draco hold for Rufus and will he reach Harry in time before Harry flees to the Muggle world?
person Kaspjo
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I almost thought the minister would thwart Harry, Luckily the Minister considered Harry a stupid as Draco had considered the Minister. Impressive work with powerful emotional gripping tearing biting chewing pulls at the reader.
person Kaspjo
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Also, I like you again
person McAbacus
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I completely missed the posting of chapter 18 and I am kicking myself. However, there was something satisfying about reading the two chapters together because I could really see the solutions unfolding. I love the lengths the boys went to to suceed, how clever it was, and especially Harry's awesome show of wandless magic.

I can't wait for the resolution to this all now, 6 more chapters to go I know but I'm so excited I want it all *now*. I am so so looking forward to the next chapter.
person Kaspjo
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If You don't give Harry everything he needs to recover from this, I may just cry in pure frustration and anger. I hate you right now.
person Silks (you send me updates under blacksilkenkitty(
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey... me again. Just wanted to ask you to not let the next chapter come in too late! Also, got two questions for you. Is this the last Series on this, or will there be a sequel.Also wanted to ask if you'd write a prequel to all of this series, just so we could angst a little... maybe even only one chapter? And, even though I didn't think I'd ask this. How many chapters left to the end of this?
Another question that popped up, even though I'm a bit shy to ask it: Harry, top or bottom???
Also wanted to say that this story has me so captivated that I've held through the raltonshippless first series and then dove into this and held through this awesome long fiction.I think there were only two other fictions that captivated me as much as this, namely Recnac Transfaerso and the Sacrifice Arc, so, there, I'll have to boost your ego a bit. Maybe like this you'll update faster? Please Please Please, update faster on the next chapter. I'm tempted to kall the ending of the last one a cliff anger.

Silks