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for A Determined Frame of Mind

by Lomonaaeren

person Kaspjo
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Crosses arms* fine!
person acr1228
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gah! MEAN MEAN cliff-hanger!
This part confused me:
When Kingsley thought of Harry, it was with pity and a faint disgust that he had let himself be so manipulated and used by the Ministry for the sake of being free to tell childish lies. He was determined that he would be nothing like Potter, and he had treasured and valued his own partner even more since everyone he knew refused to work with a pathological liar.

What did he mean, manipulated by the Ministry? Was Harry Kingsley's partner at one point?
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He knows the writing? Is it Ron? I soooo need chapter 8!
person Blacksilkenkitty
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate you for that cliff hanger. damn you to hell! But... it's hermione isn't it? *wildly guessing*
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Agh! Who's writing is it?????? Ginny's? Ginny's new bo? Please update soon!!!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
who is it? I want to know soon!
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I came across this the other day and read the first story and now this in a relatively short amount of time. You've done such a good job developing the characters and their relationship... and the Cassandra Curse and Psyche-Diving are brilliantly creative! I can
person fan fiction goodness mmm
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Brill cliff hanger. grrr.

Ah! I made it! Yeah for sequals! This fic is great! I have really noticed the change in atmosphere. Harry has twanged on my heart strings quite often. The poor man. He's got so many hang ups; trust, self-worth, self-effiecency, hope, etc... I thought the letter writing was brilliant. Though it kind of sucks for Draco who can only wonder how Harry is dealing if not "talking" about it.

By the way, "We need to talk about this, Harry."!Draco is so very cute. It is nice to see Draco in this role. Also, Draco's skills in Leglimacy and just getting around the details is impressive and fun to read. I like surprises.

And you still write seduction, desire, the overload of all senses, et all -really well. Chapters 3 and 5-woo-hoo! Yes. Yes! Yes!some more. And Draco researching how to remove his soul-gift from Harry, nearly breaks my heart. Wah!

Love this. And so glad to be caught up. I read it all in one go and couldn't decide whether to do individuals or just the latest chapter. So I decided. :)

person riddlestar
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just found your stories.. and i have yet to find a more orignal fanfiction that ive read. :D wow. im simply blown away by both these frames of mind, hehe. though i have feeling im going to like this one better, since i sure harry and draco's relationship is going to go to a different level. *grin*
please update soon~
person Myra
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry to the rescue! Harry's magic is just so wow ;D! And yeah.. I can see someone gaining some of his confidence back (cough, Harry). Good chapter!