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You should be thinking of a plan that will begin your revenge on Scrimgeour, not thinking about how his earlobes will taste.

yes, please, and thank you! I think thats my favourite line so far. And you brought in The Snape, things can only get better from here (for the reader, I realise the inclusion of Snape on top of all he is suffering means Harry might not necessarily see things as getting better)!

And bless saviour-what-saviour?Harry, a very canon attitude to take I think. I look forward to seeing how this latest plan pans out, I am tres intruiged.

That was a great chapter. This, like your other stories, just gets better as it progresses. One brilliant plot turn after another.

It -did- give me shivers, especially that beautiful bit at the end, where Harry summons up enough courage to finally accept Draco's gift of a bit of soul (I want one of them for christmas!) and they're just standing there with their hands over each oher's chests. I could -see- it and I think it was a rare moment in fanfic, an in-character, romantic moment without cliche and really very lovely!

I also like honourable!Draco and how he wants to get Harrys feelings fairly, cos that would be best. I'm just enjoying the disdain he has for everyone else compared to how earnest he is in wanting Harry. Fun!

Care for a smoke.

Imagining Draco's voice sultry as a lover and hearing his cunning plans for revenge and victory...it was like bad boy bedroom talk. Hubba hubba.

OMG that above Annon is me. Tried to back space and I [entered] the review. Oops. ^o^

So...I nearly fainted when Harry took back his gift-removal request. (YES!) 'cheese!' :D

Also, I love Draco's inner dialouge. He is so honest with his feelings and desire for Harry. The fact that he can claim his desire while also restraining himself from acting too fast is hot.

"He had the feeling that Harry would be extremely

Scrigemor is probably hopping mad and indignent about Harry now. He was stupid and dumb before now he is probably running high off of Cassandra Curse induced hate and disgust. He is just as bad as Voldemort and nearing on worse than Moldywort. Contemplating what the man was/is thinking in itself is maddening. I see why Draco was so enraged.

The chapter we've been waiting for indeed! That was MAGNIFICENT! I'm feeling so satisfied right now xD. I felt so good saying FINALLY! to myself, lol. And wow, the Minister himself eh? Who would have thought. But all the clues made sense. I'm surprised I hadn't thought it was him. Poor Harry, he certainly didn't deserve to be cursed like that, especially NOT by his own Minister whose country was saved by HARRY himself. I mean by Voldemort, yes, but out of all the people.. D: I seriously despise that dumb minister no, so bloody cruel. And the Draco-Harry's conversation was breathtaking! I was amused myself when Harry took back his words, the part when he told Draco he wanted that piece of soul that he was gifted with to stay. It's like, finally Harry! You finally starting to appreciate Draco's soul! XD I'm soo glad that Harry had accepted Draco somewhat though.. loved this chapter soooo much! I'm now feeling the need to say thanks, so yes, THANK YOU! Hehehe.

Sooo need chapter 9! Love take charge Draco! Holy smoke!

Ah! J'alarm! A mean mean ending to a chapter! I'm really enjoying the 'mind' series, its clever and Draco is a wonderful kind of canon that you acheive in all your fics. And the potential feeling between Draco and Harry is already making me shiver. X

I finally had time to get caught up. I love a good mystery and i must say that this one is a GREAT mystery. please keep up the fantastic work