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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I never realized that a little bit of mutual rubbing could be so HOT! It was written so beautifully that it was better than an all out sex scene. I have been looking forward to this moment and believe me I am soooooo not disappointed!
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hot! I mean, really, wasn't expecting that. Well, I was, but not the way it went down.
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I came out of this chapter feeling like I'd been listening to an opera, you know; when the music swells and raises into a big "aaa" and then dies down to a peaceful ending. An aria, I think its called. Anyway, all the way through I felt I was being lifted and then brought to peace. Uplifting much!?! I loved the combination of making love to Harry and making Harry believe, but not necessarily in a way that Draco used sex to convince Harry, but used sex to back up his convctions (and a little for himself too, methinks!)
I kept on highlighting lines to copy and paste as my favourite, so I'll paste whatever I did last in here, although I had many many more...
Hope had come back again.
And it was all right for him to feel it.
Now THAT is beautiful. Of all the emotions in all the world, hope is one I think Harry truly deserves in this fic. He deserves more, of course, but what he's been through, I'm so pleased he's got hope back.
I just feel so good after reading this chapter. Not cos of teh sexeh, although can I say 'Guh', but because it was a positive turning point for two characters that I was cheering on desperatly for a positive turning point!! I couldn't call it fluffy because the cricumstances that had driven them there and Harry's self image and doubt and Draco's struggles stopped that but definitely lovely and !yay!
Now bring it on, Rufus!
(my internet just went funny so if you get two copies of this, sorry)
I kept on highlighting lines to copy and paste as my favourite, so I'll paste whatever I did last in here, although I had many many more...
Hope had come back again.
And it was all right for him to feel it.
Now THAT is beautiful. Of all the emotions in all the world, hope is one I think Harry truly deserves in this fic. He deserves more, of course, but what he's been through, I'm so pleased he's got hope back.
I just feel so good after reading this chapter. Not cos of teh sexeh, although can I say 'Guh', but because it was a positive turning point for two characters that I was cheering on desperatly for a positive turning point!! I couldn't call it fluffy because the cricumstances that had driven them there and Harry's self image and doubt and Draco's struggles stopped that but definitely lovely and !yay!
Now bring it on, Rufus!
(my internet just went funny so if you get two copies of this, sorry)
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. Wonderful!! I loved it. Just as long as there are no morning after regrets or anything. I don't think I could handle that now that they're finally together. Keep up the great writing!!
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The last scene batween Harry and Draco was beautifully done. This was definitely a long awaited chapter. I can't wait to read more.
As always keep up the good work,
~ rAiNwAtEr ~
As always keep up the good work,
~ rAiNwAtEr ~
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've been following this story for some time and I figured I should finally review! Ha ha. Anyway, I just wanted to say that I really enjoy this story. So far, I have no complaints! The plot is interesting and you update fairly quicky. Keep up the good work!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holyyyy crap! *gasps*.. that was.. *speechless*. Gods, that was supernatural. I loved every single words used in the chapter. And hell yeah, I've been waiting for this chapter! YAY. *squeals* Draco was so gentle, it was really not surprising that Harry had finally, fully trusted Draco. I'm so glad he did. It's about time. This means they're together now, right? *hopeful look* I absolutely loved the fact that Draco was feeling possessive. So hot ;) I'd hate it too if other people interfered, especially Harry's friends once they find out the truth about everything. And silly, Draco, of course Harry could bring him the peace he'd always wanted. Hehee. That was perfect, absolutely perrrrffeeecct.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grrrrrrrrrr... so orgasmic (pant)! I nearly felt as tortured as D/H!!! Hahaha, anyway, great chapter and much thanks/gratitude goes to you for updating two stories (are there more?) and making sure everyone gets it in a timely manner. Not many authors do this, or do it as well as you (smirk). Sorry, couldn't resist the pun. Again, wonderful story and thanks for writing.
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 12!
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October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 12!