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for A Determined Frame of Mind

by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter! I feel so bad for Ron and Hermione... not as much as Harry having suffered all this time, but it must be so confusing for them to think Harry has turned into this person they think he's become. And then to see him with Draco... well they couldn't very well come to any different conclusions than they did. And Harry not knowing if he's "straight, bent or curved." I giggled a little when I read that. I like that he's OK with not having to define himself like that and he's just going with what feels right. Good job!
person Myra
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I didn't have the time to review for the last chapter. My apology! And thank you for chapter 13! You made me cry, again. It was sooo sad, I actually felt Harry's pain. And Ron's and Hermione's too, even though they still couldn't trust him, but they were hurt by Harry's words nonetheless. I thought that Harry was just soo strong, despite the fact that he was just as fragile at the same time. And I was glad that he let everything out, even if his best friends' memories were obliviated in the end. It was extremely hard for him, and right now I'm just happy that Draco's by his side now. Great chapter.
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Batty is going to regret that! I soooo need chapter 14!
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yay!! finally the good stuff..heheh..please continue~
person McAbacus
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Talk about dun dun dun! This was another chapter where everything seemed to go so well and this time I really felt glad for *Draco*. Before I was so pleased about Harry getting all the good things he deserved and this chapter was like a reward for Draco, after putting so much effort into being there for Harry, because I think he earnt all the progress and acheivement he got in this chapter!

I'm worried though. You write mature and enthralling drama/romance and that means that sometimes the characters have to go through some pain and after two chapters where the good outweighed the bad, and with Ron and Hermione's arrival... I'm afraid the next chapter is going to get a bit heart wrenching. I shall enjoy it regardles of course, but I think I'm going to read the last two chapters before I move on to the next one you post, for moral support! Whatever it is though, I look forward to it.
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 13! What are Ron and Hermione doing there? Will they realize Harry is there as well?
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another beautifully written chapter! Ooo... can't wait to see what happens next with Ron and Hermione!
person Kaspjo
schedule October 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're such a delicious tease. I don't even need Harry in the picture anymore. I could follow this Draco anywhere.
person So Love this fic
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Do a little dance. Make a little love. Get down tonight. Get down tonight.

LOVE this chapter. Brilliant. Beautiful. Extrodinarily touching and sweet, romantic, and NEEDED.

Thankyou. thankyouthankyouthankyouthankyou.

Hot digity. Hot damn.
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was a wonderfully written chapter :D