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Soooo need chapter 17!!!

OoOoO! Teh plot thickens! I hope Draco's slighly wobbly masterminding goes the way he wants it to. And brave Harry with his pensive... I liked the establishment of boundries in this chapter and how Draco allowed Harry his own freedom whilst reassuring him of his fears.

I hope that Draco does go back to psyche-diving in the future because the portrayal of his skill (and the fact he knew he was good) combined with the fact he still has to fight for respect in a profession he essentially created was interesting for this character. Plus, I can visualise Draco psyche-diving with the same kind of distaste that tourists use when swimming in particularily cold sea, because its not Harry's mind...hehe!

And, of course, because it deserves a mention, Harry and Draco doing the do....OOOOh!

I was soooo afraid that the minister was onto Draco! Sooo need chapter 16!

Another wonderful chapter! I liked all the stuff with the Minister. Can't wait to see Harry push that little straight voice out of his head! :)

Interesting. I have to say that I didn't see Draco confronting the minister coming. I definitely like how your story is progressing. Please update again soon.

Ooooh, I pity Batty, but at the same time I'm glad that Draco did that. Her continuous presence could be dangerous. I hope with her not being under Draco's order would not make her useful to the Minister and his cronies. Moving on, it's good that Eugenie is on their side now, she's useful. Besides, the more allies, the better. And gods, if it's not the Minister himself. I wonder how Draco's going to handle him. But knowing Draco, plus the Slytherin in him, I bet he can use that as an opportunity. Can't wait for more.

Sooo hope Draco knows what he's doing! I can't wait for chapter 15!

Alright! First of all, I love the chapter title. It was both funny and *true*. I thought Draco -was- magnificant in this and his version of wham, bam thank you ma'am with Eugenie was excellent! I liked the fact he's a one mind man now he's been in Harry's, a lovely and slightly strange show of fidelity from Draco. And I cannot tell you how much the image of Lucius shoving a woman into a fireplace has made my day...

The ball is really rolling now with this story and I found myself tingling with excitement by the end of the chapter with all the possibilities, Harry taking charge with his pensive (??), Draco having convinced another (brilliant) ally, the dastard minister appearing! And I think I saw you write in one of your review replies or notes or somthing that Batty was going to come into play a bit later on in a different way, so if thats true, intruiged about that.

Oo! And I'm interested in the idea of the curse affecting House Elves as well, that adds a little spin on things.

Looking forward to next chapter!

Wow, I love how you write Harry. I always took him as the kind of guy who has problems trusting anyone to begin with. This is purely enjoyable for the simple fact that Draco is trying to get Harry to do something I don't think he's ever truly done. I love it.

I did enjoy this chapter and I thought it was at least heart aching to hear Harry verbalise all the pain he's had to bear at the way his friends had treated him. I liked the battle between the knowledge that it wasn't their fault and the hurt he felt anyway, and I thought it was good that he sort of enjoyed yelling, because that's a human type reaction and it helped develop with the re-emerging determination and fight of Harry.

The little promises of Harry and Draco and the potential they have to last was good too, they gave me a happy little zing here and there. And I'm looking forward to Draco being Master!Plan man!