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for When Two Are One

by rachxoxo

schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nicely done!!
person ZooArmy
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story's really good. I hope you will finish it, because I like the way you describe the characters. I love them and am really curious what will happen in the next chapter. Oh the suspense. tehe.
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter (4) its rather emotional and it will open up a lot of things for you to do WONDERFUL Fairies hehe!
Also I love where you ended the chapter 'no stay' ~Random fan-boy squeal
Um but I do have one concern about this chapter the boys left a baby three flights of stairs down on a chair ... even with the protection charm that is not a good idea! lol! Weren't they suppose to WATCH him?!
I wonder if the two women will get upset with them...
Also -gasp- Draco has clothes laying on the FLOOR?! -mock horror-
I'm going to check out What Shakes The Elephant, I've been avoiding reading it for some reason... but I've been reading everything else I can get my hands on...
Something I think you might enjoy is 'Ferinus Consanguinitas'
Just thought you should check it out.

Hope to see the update soon,
-Ero

schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I sooo need chapter 5! Harry's roses were perfect!
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
poor lucius but great chap!
person Anon
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
still loving it!
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Draco barely escaped! I sooo need chapter 4! What happened?
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I rather like this it is a great way your going here! Your setting everything up nicely and working your way into the slash so it will be believable rather than those other ones thats aren't heh...

Anyway great job so far many kisses to you... OH and UPDATE Soon lol! I'll be waiting

~Ero
person Anon
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love your story, hated the epilogue anyway. dying for more!
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE PLEASE!!!!!muahhhhhhh