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for When Two Are One

by rachxoxo

schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
me like dis
pls pls update soon
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just read this whole thing and all I can say is ppppllllleeeeaaaasssseeeee!!!!!! update soon. I am totally hooked! I love your writing, Harry and Draco are so true to their character, and Narcissa too, that's just the way I picture her. I love that she and Andromeda have come together again *aawwww*

OK so I guess I could have said more, and really, I can say alot more still( all good praise), but for the sake of time let me just reiterate - ppppllllleeeeaaaasssseeeee!!!!!! update soon.
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so need more!!!:)
person ZooArmy
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'll announce it publicly: I love you forever and a day. YES Yes YESSSS! I loved that chapter soooo much. So much sexual tension. ROAR! And their inner voices were really good - made me laugh hard.
BTW I don't like kreacher anymore, he always pops up in most inept moments *sigh*
oh and, hehe, in my story Draco had a dragon constellation at his ceiling as well, hehe.
update soon, yeah??? Pretty please covered with cookies for bribery.
p.s. did the car dealer at least look like Harry P? That would be feast for my eyes. *jealous me*
schedule September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Eww house elves having sex mentioned again. Can't wait till the next one.
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 8! Nice way to wind up in his bed!
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
These two chapters seem ever so slightly different than your others i can't place exactly how but they are. I still like them and all and its great. I wonder however how the elves ....... ick.... are going about their... time i thought they lived to serve?

Anyway keep it up and omg ick elves!

~Ero
schedule September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Way to keep us coming back for more. I like this a lot because you've kept them both very much in character, which is hard to do when they're foils of each other, and are supposed to actually be able to sustain a relationship. So kudos for that.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A nice cliffhanger for a boy who so desperately wants to know what happens next.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yeahhh!!:)