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for When Two Are One

by rachxoxo

schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I suppose in the next chapter we are in store for some action, as if this was a The Strokes song.
And yes, it is very exciting indeed. I love your extensive vocabulary in this chapter.
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story so far!! Hope you update soon!
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Harry dare him to show you!!

That was very nice. Just one tiny little thing, I don't like your Ron. Sorry but as a Ron lover I had to say it, he would never act that way.

But still this is all about Harry/Draco and they are delicious, so you know I'll be back, cause I WANT MORE!!
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
The idea of a kiss from either one of those boys excites me. I'm enjoying this very much, please update soon.
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha 'You should see what else i can do with my tongue.' thats great

~Ero
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't tell you often enough how much I love your story!
The making-up scene between Draco, Ron and Hermione was great - touching, but without overdoing it.
I wasn't too fond of the house-elf part either so I appreciate that you cut it short this time. But of course I am ready to read as much house-elf sex as I have to, if only I get to read more of this story.
And finally, finally some making out between Harry and Draco. Can't wait for more.
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i just read this and am thoroughly enjoying it. i hope you update soon. i can't wait to read the rest
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sooo need chapter 9! Frustration did wonders for them!
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay the golden trio and draco made up and now things are starting to get sexy lol. i love it so update soon. And thanks for no house elf nastiest.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so cute i love how they all makeup.