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for When Two Are One

by rachxoxo

schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very, very good. You handled Harry and Draco's journey from former mortal enemies to guarded friends to surprised and delighted lovers very nicely. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so great!!
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh that was wonderful! Loved Harry's replies to Ginny! Sooo can't wait for chapter 11!
person ZooArmy
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! *tries to calm her heartbeat* Phew. that was... phew *lol* really, REALLY good chapter and I liked the scene with Ginny. yeah, kick her arse!
BTW: you spelled it perfectly right *grin* and I *squeed* again while reading this chapter and I cried when he talked to his parents grave. Jeez that was rough and so beautifully written. *sniff*
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Action indeed. Oh, how you beautiful writers invoke the naughty boy in me. :]
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this! I don't even know what to say, it's so beautiful!
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Harry is getting just as forward as Draco - that can only lead to (lots of *hint*) good things :)

OK, I'll bite - email on the way for update. I meant to do it before *shrugs*

It's really an incentive to review when you answer back, although you don't have too, I would review anyway. I have to, its common courtesy, and it keeps your juices flowing and your muse happy so that your story will be even better and you would want to update faster. But I really appreaciate you addressing my silly rant, lol. You do with your characters what you will, I will survive. All I really need (and soon)is some Harry/Draco action (read sex) pppllleeeaaassseee!
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter!!! They can be friends and lovers! Those are the kind that last! I soooo need chapter 10!
person ZooArmy
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I missed a chapter, I missed a bloody chapter. shame on me! I feel bad. BUt I loved ch08. It's soooo great that they finally kissed and everything and and and.... oh I simply loved it.
I'm of to chapter nine.
person ZooArmy
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Heya,
even so chapter nine was a bit shortish it was perfect. *squee* can't say it differently.