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for The Rules of Life

by BlindedHP

person Ryu
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey! When are you going to carry on with ur other story? THe one where Harry was losing his memory....
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1


i like fecking loveeeeeeeeee youuuuuuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this story is amazing write more. quickly!!!!!
person mill
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no christmas?
person mill
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
how did harry floo if he couldn't speack?
person fragonknight01
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was an interesting chapter 1. I am not really into the Dom/sub or Master/slave scene so it was nice of Sev to rescue Harry. I would like to know what kind of wish magic has Harry not speaking, and of course I can hardly wait to see what happens when Sev finds out that he is Harry Potter.
person fragonknight01
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch 3; it is nice to see Severus taking care of Harry even after he knows who he is and after saying that he would not take care of him. Albus is a right old git here...
person fragonkngiht01
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch4: Interesting and alarming... Your Albus is truly horrifying and to have such a maggot around little children, or anyone for that matter is just so realistic isn't it?

I like the way Severus is developing into a better person.
person fragonknight01
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch5: That is so sweet that Sev is now worried that Harry won't be with him.
person fragonknight01
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ch6 & &7
I was horrified to see that you killed Harry's friend, Andy. Good job with Severus though. I like the Hermione getting interested angle, but where is Dumbledore in all this?
person anniea
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update soon, glad to hear that you're better but update soon *kisses*