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for The Rules of Life

by BlindedHP

schedule January 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Update this!!!! Not that I want you to rush this is you are, however slowly, working on it... but please don't let it die on the wayside! Its too good! :(
person Makovaso
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon.
person moit
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
English is not your first language? That threw me off completely. I have read TONS of work by native-English speakers that needs to be revised about 5,000 times. You write beautifully.
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this! It's GREAT having a really good storyline. I can't wait for moooooore!
It's written really well. I'm loving the Dumbledore bashing by the way. He's no where near as nice as he's made out in the books. No way could someone nice manipulate people like that! Also the way Snape is still caring towards Harry and the way the insights of Snape's thoughts show his true feelings towards everyone. He's still really in character but you get to see more of that glimpse that Rowling showed us in the last book where he loved Lily.
The inserting of Harry as the hero in the second year was done realy well. I love seeing what could be happening if Harry had died sometime before Hogwarts or disappeared.
I shall be watching fervently for some more updates. Can't wait!
person yaoified
schedule November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! PLEASE!!! update PLEASE!!!!! TT.TT i need more!!!
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic so far. I can't wait to read more. xx Have you thought of Harry recieving a pet snake? Might be an idea if the transigurationy creature has faded by now.
person Kasen
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update please?! please please please please please! Its freaking amazing!
person Makovaso
schedule October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good!! please update soon!
person Makovaso
schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really good!! please update!
person Jennifer
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great fic, dont know how i missed it before. thanks!