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for The Rules of Life

by BlindedHP

person Darkless
schedule October 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Well, we've gotten a little farther than when I read this story last. Yes, I'm still reading it, checking for new chapters every now and then. I'm glad to see Harry slowly coming out of his shell. Nothing but time, understanding, consistancy and a lot of TLC will help there. Time really does help bad things fade in our memory, unless there is no understanding of them. When you don't know the 'why' of something, it eats at you, you examine and anylize it you poke at it like a sore tooth. But once you understand a thing, it is easier to accept it for what it is and then let it go. Still, there's more healing needed. Lead on!
person Leania07
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this chapter as well. LOL seems like Snape is learning the basic rule of parenthood (or guardianship); you spend the first few years teaching them to walk and talk, and the rest of their lives to sit down and shut up!

Detention every night for a month?? Ebil Snape! LOL, glad to read about Harry finally becoming a little chatterbox. I await your next chapter ^.^

Leania
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
it's a pleasure to hear harry babble excitedly like the kid he never got to be. Its sad that its really hitting him what those bastards did to him now. I feel a bit sorry for siri but it's his own fault. If he'd kept himself to himself, he'd still be free of the clink he'd just escaped form. f'd in the head or not. As for dumbles, tch, he got off mild. Still, i imagine voldi will have a field day with that one.
schedule January 5, 2012 at 12:00 AM
welcome back. I gotta honestly say i never expected this to be continued but i'm bloody glad it is. It's too good a fic to leave laying. I hope you have something dire planed for dumbldim and this rather disturbed version of Siri.
person cleo
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! What a splendid gift!!! This story was one of my favorites, but by now I thought it was abandoned once and for all so I very very happy to know you have more time for writing. I look forward to read the next chapters.
person Neogetz
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
So glad to see you're back. Loved this story when it first came out and was sad to see it neglected. Looking forwards to the continuation.
person Leania07
schedule January 4, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This is an intense story, and you have captured my attention. I'm glad to hear you have a bit more free time for writing this story, as I don't think I could wait a year for the next part. ;) My only complaint (which is to be expected, considering) is the tense of some of the words. It doesn't happen often, which I've gathered either you or your beta (if you have one) catch and correct. Its not really a complaint, but I can't think of what else to call it...caution perhaps? Friendly advise to carefully review??

However, keep up the excellent work, and I can't wait for your next chapter.
schedule September 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I hope you contine this story soon, it is amazing!
person Gypsii
schedule June 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A very good story. I cannot wait to read more.

I think that yes, Harry should be entered into Hogwarts, but probably not until at least his fourth year. I have a feeling that these sessions with this person is going to help him start talking again. I would very much like him to start talking. Also, I think that Snape might need a little more...something. Please continue with this story, as I can see it progressing greatly.
person Anon
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to update? great story