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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I wonder how Severus will react when he finds our that Harry's last name is Potter. I am looking forward to seeing what will happen next.
Update soon
Update soon
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
fantastic first chapter. it is so long and really really good. update soon.
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
if there were any spelling and grammar mistakes i didn't pick up on any so no worries. please update soon this seems very good.
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was a very good fic and don't worry I've seen people with English as their first language with much more grammar errors than I saw in that fic. *shrug* I'm a prime example. I can't wait to see your next update till then. -Amara
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Considering english isn't your first language you do incredible well in writing in it. Interesting start and I will look forward to reading more.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
write more, poor kid that's just sick, using children in that way
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is very intresting. i wonder how sev will react when he finds out thatthe boy is in fact Harry potter.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
english may not be your first language, but you have a better grasp of it than some people who have been reading and writing it their whole lives. congrats, great story.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this was very very good beginning
and your english is very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye
and your english is very good
keep going and post soon
bye bye