rate_review Reviews

Hey! This story would be more interesting if it wasn't all in journal format. You need some actual interaction between the pups. Just some constructive criticism. :)

No one reviewed?! im scandalized! just read the entire thing just now. its really good. i like the whole diary thing because it gives me an opportunity to make up things for myself as well when not everything is described in details, but you probably should have a tiny bit of 'objective' writing to let us know, not just what they feel, but bwhat they do as well. please dont go on strike, i love this pairing