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cute! could you please please email me when a new chap's up? silly_annie88@hotmail.com

Please continue this story for at least another hundred chapters! Is it okay if I archive this at my site? I'm starting an archive of my favorite fanfiction and it's by couple, and Sirius/Remus is one of my favorites! (The others are Tom/Harry from Star Trek: Voyager and Data/Geordi from Next Gen.) You've captured the feelings of Sirius and Remus very well, though in the books it says James and Lily don't get together till their seventh year. But a well written story!!!

im so glad it worked out, but its not finished yet is it. i really dont want it to be....*pleades*

im glad Siri regrets it and feels bad, he should, but i hope it works out for them in the end. im a sucker for happy endings. and ive changed my mind about the objective POV, the diary thing is really growing on me.

Keep 'em coming! I cannot wait for the next chapter

Love and slash,
Lady Sinistra

im a bit angry at paddy. youn dont take someone from behind their first time. you just dont. its like a sex code of ethics.

You are both more then welcome. I more then meant every word! :) I really do like this story a lot. Very nice chapter, just remember what some of the reviewers are saying - Just because it's a journal story doesn't mean it can't hold a lot of detail, especially in the way things feel or look or even smell. The more detail you go into, the longer the chapter, and the more people will want to read it. Oh! And it might be a good idea to throw in a chapter with Peter or James' thoughts every once in a while, just for something different. It might draw in more readers!

Love and slash,
Lady Sinistra

It's such a shame when great stories have to stop because they aren't getting any reviews. I love this story so far. It's adorible and this is one of my favorite pairings. Nice job and I hope you get the reviews you deserve very very soon.

Love and slash,
Lady Sinistra

I like diary format. Its one of the most realistic wasy to give a point of view, in the character's own written words. I expecially like the switching between the two journals, one wouldn't give enough information in the story. I'm liking this so far and I hope you get lots of reviews so you'll keep going!

I can't beleive no one reviewed your story! I love Marauder era Sirius/Remus stories. I like the format just fine, besides how would you change the format out of diary once you've already started writing it in that format? I really like your story and lots of people should review cuz I want you to write more!