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by luvhp

schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
what's this, updating so early?! only kidding!

great chapter and a fantastic way to end the story. I always have a problem figuring out how to end a story so well done you!

As you know, I love Conventions... so I will be definitely looking out for that and I am intrigued about what your next story will be. Any hints at the characters?

schedule October 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How did I miss a chapter??? Oh, wait. It was all the time I spent at work this week. Anyway, both chapter 6 and 7 were fab! I had hoped to see some reaction out of Hermione about the baby, or does she not know yet? If you continuing this fic (which I certainly hope you are!) then the emotional consequences of what happen should be very interesting to read!
person mhaj78
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww-ww-ww...so sad, but so sweet. It hurts my heart. He needs her so much...and she was pregnant! Ohhh...I can't wait for the update.
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful chapter! I loved Lucius' death scene and am glad that Draco didn't have to kill him. Looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOoo you are such a quick updater with both stories!! I love it!!! Horray for dead lucius!! Sad about everything else of course, but it makes for a lovely story. Can't wait for more!!!
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
now come on, you know you don't have to use the Imperio to get me to review!

Great chapter and I just feel so sorry for Draco. But, there is that glimmer of hope that they'll get thru this.

I can't wait to see where you go now. roll on friday!
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww this is so sad! I'm glad Hermione is alright but poor Narcissa, and their baby! :( ... Hopefully Draco will get back in time to deal with Lucius. Update soon!
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh god, she was pregnant?! and Narcissa's dead?! what are you trying to do? make everyone an emotional wreck?!

poor Draco and even though I love Lucius, I hope Draco gets his revenge.

great chapter, great story and I'm loving the way you're going with it. Already looking forward to next chapter.

person mhaj78
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OKay this is BRUTALLY SAD!!! (but I still LOVE it!!!!) can't wait ... thanks for the early post!!!
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What are you doing????!!!! OMG....you're killing me here...I can't take it...