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by WonderBritney

schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! So cute!
And you have perfectly portrayed buses during peak hours. Oh how I loath buses. And trams. And trains.
Nice fic! Specially the nuzzling at the end. -winks-
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where is the next chapter?! Please tell me that you have not abandon this story! I would be absolutely devistated. I hope you update again soon.

~ rAiNwAtEr ~
person Vibora
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cooool! ^^ great so far! cant wait for more!
person Cindee
schedule September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aaawwwww! I love it! It's amazing!
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, you have to update soon, this is so good. you're doing a great job, please continue to write!! :)
person rinchan
schedule September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it!~ Please write more?

PS: I made a wish on a star for another chapter soon:)
person mariahs_fantasy
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the story so far. update soon :)
person NightLo
schedule August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't other stare at them more if they openly flirt with each other? Obviously they are...
person Myra
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Omgosh! Hahahaha. That was funny AND cute! XD. Loved it, Draco was AWEEESOME <3 You guys are great!
person A Kira
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hahahahaha!!! OMG, this is great! Hope you continue!