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by WonderBritney

person Anon
schedule July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh please update. and soon.
schedule April 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love the story^^ I hope you update again soon!!
person SilverKitten
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You should deffinately update again very soon! I've loved this from the first sentence.
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know what took me so long to read this but it's good. Wait, yes I do. I'm the beta for the Coven and a free lance beta. I've been hellishly busy. *grunts* But now that I have time, after staying up all night, I'm glad I read it. It is very well written and attention grabbing. I loved that how even though we knew it was Draco from the beginning that it wasn't revealed until the middle of the second chapter. I like that Harry is the shy, quick to blush...blushing virgin (?). And I love the confidence that Draco projects. It's abso-fucking-lutely amazing.

I generally don't start a story that is a WIP until it's about ten or so chapters in. That way, if it's good I don't feel like I'm waiting for the next chapter. Right now I'm kicking myself for breaking my own rule. I don't want to rush you but I would like you to know that I'm waiting for the next chapter. I like the way it's progressing and the flow is beautiful. For this to be written by two people you guys are perfectly in sync. Harry's and Draco's character were established in the first chapter and it followed into the next. So far there are no inconsistencies in personality and that's great. There were no awkward errors in information that many co-op stories have. I am definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Nikki
MisstressNicole@hotmail.com
person redlightspin
schedule February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
as long as you keep writing this story I don't care if you put a glove on your head and run around naked screaming "look at me i'm a squid!!", SO START WRITNG THE NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!must know how harry's molested next.
person Rempadfoot
schedule February 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well that was different I like it^_^
person Cedi Luvdon
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this story is really cute. I can't wait for the next chapt. I love arrogant!Draco and flustered! cute! Harry. Draco said commoners, is he like some prince or duke or something?
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
More Please. :D

~Ley
schedule February 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I love this story so far. I so cannot wait for the next chapter. I think it's hilarious, the first time Harry went on the bus, that is how it is here, especially when the bus is going to the ferry terminal, it's such a pain when the bus is packed. Anyways, I love this story, as I said before.
person SP777 [don't wanna sign in]
schedule February 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...*stretches leisurely*

ANOTHER humorous story I can work with. :-)
You guys are doing pretty good with the direction you're going thus far. I think I like an amorous, persistent Draco in the pursuit of 'happyness'. ;-)

Despite Harry's need to kill said blonde...