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for Some Secrets Should Be Told

by Shananigans

person ichiruki
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh shit...I don't think that's going to end well for anyone lol. or maybe I'm wrong! I'm on the edge of my seat here!

Keep it up!
person luvhp
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, yes, it's Ass kicking time!! I love "Hero Draco" Keep it up.
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok ok...I'm still with you. At first I was in shock you would create a storyline with Harry as a creepy pervy rapist and then I was disgusted that he would enlist Ron to do a double penetration gang bang on Hermione..and then I was mad at you for making Hermione go through all that and then I was intrigued about where you would go with this...so now you've updated and it's still intriguing...I'm still mad at you for doing that to Hermione but I can't deny I'll be waiting for you next update.
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person erika
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahhh!!!!! i luv it i just kind of stumbled upon it a couple days ago and i fell in love its awesome keep up the good work i cant wait till the next chapter!!!!
person LiaTrent
schedule September 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh gah, cliffhanger!!!
person kmplease
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*Tears*, why are you doing that to Hermonie, she did nothing to you!?! That was good, please update soon!!!
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
person ichiruki
schedule September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think there were a few lines that might have been type-o'd

"So, did you have your fun? Did you get your frustrations out? Ar
I can't wait for her to get back.

and

I notice her face is shimmering e you going to talk again?"


Otherwise good chappie! I'm curious to see how Draco will develop, or see his back story develop a bit like what was it at those DE meetings that changed his outlook in regards to violence, like where does the bully draw the line and does he stay a bully, ya know?

Anyways keep it up!