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for All You Had to Do Was Ask

by soldiersgirl0709

person amsev
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely, lovely! Sexy and hot! Now you just have to write a sequel where Hermione gets to spank Severus!
person Jocelyn25
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Quote:"All You had to do was ask."

PLEASE,qill write more fabulous stories? :)

I never could stand reading Snape/Hermione stories cause they were always awful...until i read yours :)

Thanks for another wonderful reading experience

Jocy
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a particularly entertaining one-shot. The flirting war and her drunken pass were wonderful. And all she had to do was ask.
person Anon
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: I loved this story. Hermione is all grown up and Snape is reluctantly drawn to the curvy woman, but stands aloof. Hermione uses all her wiles, one after the other to catch his eye, but keeps failing. I think she doesn't know that she's wearing him down with each attempt, until finally he's had enough and when she angers him, that's it. I loved the banter between them as they warily circle each other, Hermione looking for a way in and Snape attempting to guard himself against her sneaky tries.

The sex was beyond hot, and it's obvious Severus has his own dark allure which was displayed in throbbing colors in this tale. Whew, that man should be arrested for 'forcible Snape'.

The ending was just perfect. I never saw that coming but it was like a delicious cherry on top of a hot Snape sundae. (I couldn't say hot Fudge sundae because it would be confusing considering there is a Cornelius Fudge and that would be just ewwwww.)

Great job!!
person reirei
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Utterly fantastic. Your a brilliant comedic talent. Love the shirt idea! Keep writing.
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person snape7
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great! I love it and i deffinitely want those shirts of yours. the story is wonderfully written, malfoy was good too. :)
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking fantastic. They should take this and put it in a category entitled "The proper way to write Snape/Hermione fan fiction." :D Seriously.
person Jen618
schedule August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh, I wanted to read this, but I need paragraph spacing. It's really, really hard to read and enjoy a story without it.