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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a happy sad type of ending
It's nice cause they are together but sad cause Sev is still insecure about his relationship with Harry. He doesnt turn on the lights when they have sex cause he is afraid to completely show himslef, Sev is afraid that if he does that Harry will leave him. At least that's how it seems to me
It's nice cause they are together but sad cause Sev is still insecure about his relationship with Harry. He doesnt turn on the lights when they have sex cause he is afraid to completely show himslef, Sev is afraid that if he does that Harry will leave him. At least that's how it seems to me
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I dont think its terrible at all
i rather think it's brilliant~ =3
the plots interesting~
it gives a rather mysterious vibe
the ending its like you shouldn't poke yourself into other peoples business kinda way
tempting n delicious to know what goes on inside snapes head =3
I dont think you lost your touch at all if you haven't written in a long time
oxoxoxox
i rather think it's brilliant~ =3
the plots interesting~
it gives a rather mysterious vibe
the ending its like you shouldn't poke yourself into other peoples business kinda way
tempting n delicious to know what goes on inside snapes head =3
I dont think you lost your touch at all if you haven't written in a long time
oxoxoxox
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
the ending seems sad but not sad at all kind of way
severus's insecurity is dreadful but
I hope someday
he would get over his insecurity
and show him the expressions he hides under the dark
i'm glad harry will still stay in hogwarts
or else~ it would be rather sad
thank you for this =3 delicious story
severus's insecurity is dreadful but
I hope someday
he would get over his insecurity
and show him the expressions he hides under the dark
i'm glad harry will still stay in hogwarts
or else~ it would be rather sad
thank you for this =3 delicious story
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thank you. You've really made me feel better about writing.
I'm contemplating a sequel for this fic, perhaps something a little more positive.
That is if my muse doesn't pack up and leave for another couple of years >.<
Piker
I'm contemplating a sequel for this fic, perhaps something a little more positive.
That is if my muse doesn't pack up and leave for another couple of years >.<
Piker
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked it in a dark way. I kept wondering what Severus thinks during all that time, perhaps there might be a sequel? I wound not mind, but the thing is about sequels is that most of them do not live up to the first fanfic reputation of the plot. I do want to read the sequel, but I'm afraid it won't be quite the same as the first. So in a way, this should be a one shot...
I don't know. I'm not here to criticizes, I mean you can go review my work and say this is crap! *Smiles* I just felt that this should be left alone, its sad, yet hopeful in a way.
BUT! I do wish for you to write more Snarry fics! I like your writing style, simple yet strikes hard. Speaking of Snarry fics, I should go and finish my second fic. *Laughs* Love to see more of your work in the future.
I don't know. I'm not here to criticizes, I mean you can go review my work and say this is crap! *Smiles* I just felt that this should be left alone, its sad, yet hopeful in a way.
BUT! I do wish for you to write more Snarry fics! I like your writing style, simple yet strikes hard. Speaking of Snarry fics, I should go and finish my second fic. *Laughs* Love to see more of your work in the future.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Aww thanks. That's so sweet!
Piker
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