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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent.
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September 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I just wish these two would talk about their fears and get on with making each other happy. Severus thinks he is doing what is best for Hermione but is truly hurtin himself and her.
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September 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I liked this chapter. I can't wait to read more.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great post, love the story, can't wait until you post again, so please post again soon. Thanks.
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August 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Just a suggestion, in writing you normally begin a new paragraph each time someone else speaks. It makes it much easier to understand. If you look at the way experienced writers do it you'll see what I mean. As an example, you could change your para to look something like this.
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Hermione made her way to Gryffindor table and found her seat in between Harry and Ron.
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Hermione made her way to Gryffindor table and found her seat in between Harry and Ron.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This sounds really good. I hope you continue it.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's cute and sweet and well worth going on with.