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for The Greatest Gift

by Sweetie

schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent. I can't wait to read more. Please continue.
person Apryl
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh Gods! I know she was excited, but I hope she changed out of her gown first.
person Tenar10r
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is turning out very nicely.
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uh, considering the students don't stand up when the TEACHERS enter a room (or the Great Hall) how come they'll have to do so for a fellow student just because she happens to be married? I don't really get it.
person Sweetie
schedule September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I kinda didn't think such a small detail would be paid attention to, to be perfectly honest, I never know what direction the story's going to go in, it just comes to me and that's what goes. Also, didn't feel like changing things. so there it is i guess. OH YEAH! Very special thanks to Catysmom, your messages help me to update sooner because it seems like you've been following along from the beginning, you are appreciated. One more thing, I'm going to write a new story, so look out for that.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like it. Please update soon.
schedule September 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Severus going to be a daddy, how great is that!
person Anon
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i hope there not be any cheating going on because if severus cheats on her then he will need to be slaped and the same gose for hermione if she cheats on severus she will need to be slaped