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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Cool, those dreams progressed perfectly and seeing both of their reactions was spot on.
The moment they interacted through the link, it was immediate acceptance and showed obvious hostility-I liked that. Plus the way they suddenly started talking more amiable..that flashback and memory were believable. Twin talk was confusing but then when isnt it :P Harry seemed to blab almost too much to Voldie about his 'relatives' but I suppose his anger got the better of him? They're kind of cute together, as kids really. What caused them to alienate from each other in the first place though..according to Harry's dream in DD's custody??
Oh and the emotions, confusion and thoughts (Voldie's especially) were great and really well done.
Good job you used this AFTER Voldie tried for possession cause you can use his presence in Harry's mind as the reason for a breakdown of memories for them both, while the graveyard doesnt seem quite as plausible.
Now whats your explanation for the killing curse failing or is that the same? How many knew about this Kieran business? and why doesnt others like Hagrid remember? Looking forward to the rest of this...its one of the better ones ive read so far! ^__^ please continue!
The moment they interacted through the link, it was immediate acceptance and showed obvious hostility-I liked that. Plus the way they suddenly started talking more amiable..that flashback and memory were believable. Twin talk was confusing but then when isnt it :P Harry seemed to blab almost too much to Voldie about his 'relatives' but I suppose his anger got the better of him? They're kind of cute together, as kids really. What caused them to alienate from each other in the first place though..according to Harry's dream in DD's custody??
Oh and the emotions, confusion and thoughts (Voldie's especially) were great and really well done.
Good job you used this AFTER Voldie tried for possession cause you can use his presence in Harry's mind as the reason for a breakdown of memories for them both, while the graveyard doesnt seem quite as plausible.
Now whats your explanation for the killing curse failing or is that the same? How many knew about this Kieran business? and why doesnt others like Hagrid remember? Looking forward to the rest of this...its one of the better ones ive read so far! ^__^ please continue!
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September 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
amazing. this is wonderful. i cant wait to read the rest.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot twist. Great job! I can't wait to read more on it.
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August 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! One that is different and hasn't been done before. I love it! Please update quickly!!!
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. I like how you've started this story and I look forward to your insights as to how the twins evolve to lovers.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so interesting i love it! i cant wait to read more hope to see an update soon. ^_^
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is really really good, highly original. Cant wait for next chapter.
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your doing a great job, so please update chapter 5 soon. ^_^
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August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
MORE!!! please?