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for Meant to Be

by bewdsorcerer

schedule September 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. That was an amazing first chapter! Can't wait to read more. Until the next chapter! :)
person NS
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well...that's unexpected. I'll give a real critique once there is more to read.
person Aalto
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hihii, promising, veeery promising, I hope you'll continue with this, it's very interesting. Please update soon and make it a bit longer please...
person Ciar
schedule September 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great start to a story! I really want to know what happens next, looking forward for the next chapter. Update soon. ^^
person Madhater
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i hope to see an update soon i cant wait to read more of the fic its very interesting ^_^
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I do so envy your talent for writing, it is just so much more detailed and interesting than anything I can come up with. Yours just seems to smooth and natural where I keep thinking that what I write is forced and mediocre, blah.

I think that this is a wonderful good start and quite interesting and you can look forward to me pestering you for more.

Lady D
person Drkluver
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooh who pushed him in?
person Anon
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh man this story is awsome keep going
person kunitsu
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooooh I like this. I wonder where Harry went when he passed through the mirror

Update soon
person MJLuvsPolar
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is a fantastic first chapter - I think I might be hooked already! You'd better come back and update soon, just to make sure. ~_^

MJ