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for Slave Or Lover

by LovinThatDraco21

person miakitty
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u seriously need to post the next chapter,this is awesome,i always like Draco/Hermione fict without Ron,Harry and Hogward in it. Voldrmrd win and Draco is powerfull,while miss hermione is powerless but end up wit draco as his lover.. Perfect story,please complete the story as fast as possible!i will read all of it,i promise
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
okay, so, this is what i think of it so far: on a scale of 1 to 10, with 10 being the best and 1 being the worst, i would have to say that i would give your story an overall 8. because i like the concept of it and i just adore DM/HG fics, so there. haha keep it up! i would really like to read more please! and if you have time, could you put me on an e-mail list when you update this story? thank you! :)
person ichiruki
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have a couple questions that I hope you'll take as constructive criticism and not bashing, I'm curious about a few points:

1. What happened to Hermione's wand?
2. Why are they letting her sit down with them, if she's the maid isn't she serving them?
3. Are there any house elves at this manor?
4. Would there be a registry of less than purebloods?

I was liking the story although it had an unexplained "pretty woman" feel I had these thoughts and was hoping as the story progressed that maybe you could answer these. I could see Malfoy wanting something pretty to fit in with his surroundings, I guess it's wondering what happened to Hermione's wand that gets me or the house elves.

Cheers
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o0ooo Good 1st chappiee! I really like it.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i sooo need more!!
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWWW.. I love it!! Keep updating... Fuccin Pansy.. jealous ass bitch! hahaha.. UPDATE!
person Kilalla
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it, but what will happen when the figure out who she really is?

i love drama! lol

update soon yea?
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww I really like where this is going. ^_^ Great job, please keep it up.
schedule August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it and i dont bash thats just mean and whatever you write i just go with the flow.