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by Gryffindorclutz

schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I wasn't expecting the shoe to drop until after the babies were born. I also wasn't expecting the threat of publishing the pictures to mean anything to her at this point.
*still in shock*
person ichiruki
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
um, what the hell was that? oh, only evil cliffy action!!! and you totally know it, i bet there is some evil smirking being done, am i right? what the hell was she still doing at *THEIR* home, she still cares about the pictures?! damn i was hoping she'd finally grow a set and tell him to fuck off on those, but reducto'ing his manhood apparently had pretty decent results, over an hour in the bathroom to get them back eh? argghhhh still about the way that last chapter ended!
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
damn!!!!!!!!!!
that was great, I can't wait for your next update, hopefully soon!
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow! That was amazing! Draco finally feels the weight of what he's done but at the same time I feel Hermione should get over it because he clearly cares a great deal for her. This chapter was written very well. I wonder if Draco will seriously print those pictures?
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Draco really screwed up. If he had just come clean before and told her how he felt, well, things would have gone a lot differently. I hope they can work things out. But Hermione better make him work for it. Hope you can update again soon!
person kazfeist
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh-oh! The feces is about to hit the air-conditioning system, innit? Poor Draco...and poor Hermione! You'll get 'em over this little obstacle, though, right? Right? ;)
person genna
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Utterly brilliant. I know guys like this Draco you have painted.

I come to fanfiction for escape but also plausible and insightful plot lines. Most of the time I fail but this story is so believable. I can see Draco hiding somewhere thinking that no matter how manipulative he has been, he still can quench the lonely feeling. I can also see Hermione falling in love with him as is only to find that his manipulations are too toxic to tolerate.

I have met guys this withdrawn who don't understand social interactions on their most basic level. They make mistakes like this ALL THE TIME. NO MATTER HOW OLD HE IS. I hope Hermione and the boys can either re-socialize him or learn to accept a lot of his loving efforts will be misguided.

I hope the inspiration that has allowed you to get 14 chapters into this story keep prompting you to go a little further for a while longer.

I have enjoyed your story immensely.
schedule January 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
mmmwhahahaha
Oh My Gawd!
this story is just tooo goood!
I love it! Draco is just to
naughty for his own good.
But geez I'm sorry for Hermione,
3 babies at one time will turn me wacko!
^_^lol
person mhaj78
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh no no no!!! I know it was inevitable that she found out...but I hope he says the right things so that she sees it was only his insecurity over his love for her that cuased him to do it. Oh please don't let her be too pissed...!!!! And please update soon! I do love this story. :)
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited to see that you updated. Amazing chapter. OMG, Hermione is soooo very pissed off. Draco's worst nightmare is about to come true. Thanks for updating, can't wait to read the next chapter.