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person Kilalla
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i think its lame to get her pregnant, that is so selfish, but totally soemthing Draco would do so i guess its up to you lol
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really like the new chapter as for the vote.. I think draco should let fate deside. Let hermoine fall so in love with him that she wants no one else. Oh and if you could, make them have a big fight and than hard make up sex!!!(dirty mind is a joy 4 ever!!)
person mhaj78
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I SMILED THE WHOLE TIME I READ THIS CHAPTER!!!!! Oh gosh, I simply ADORE this story! Sigh. You've made my day. Seriously!! Now, as to how it should go...I don't know! (that's why I read the D/Hr stuff and not write it!) I just don't want there to be a conflict where DM misunderstands and thinks HG is with Alex...ew. Not even cool.

What if he finally works up the nerve to propose, with the back up plan being if she says no, then he'll get her "knocked up", and then when he proposes, she reveals that she IS preggers...just a thought! I have to be honest, I hate the thought of this story ending!!

But the holiday with her family was great and I LOVED the grandma's response!! Can we please see more of Draco and Hermione interacting? I loved how you wrote of what made her stand out to him as "different" than the others he had dated. That was perfect! But surely she's starting to "feel something" for him--more than obligation and duty?

WHATEVER you decide...I know I will enjoy it! Thanks for sharing your creativity!! Made my day. :)
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess it depends on how you want to go about it. Do you want Draco to like...become a 'nice' guy, and have morals and all of that. Or do you want him to still be the 'bad' guy, who would do anything to keep Hermione. I remember a few chapters before this one when they could feel 'each other', like how the other person was experiencing the sex, well in that Chapter it said about how Draco purposely didn't use the protection spell, and hoped she wouldn't notice. That right there seems like he was already trying to get her pregnant! About how she would be forever tied to him. I personally think you should write Draco trying to get her pregnant:P Maybe that's just the perv in me though. hahaa!! I love this story! I kinda just read it all now..that's why I remember that so clearly. Anyway, you got my vote!

Shannon xoxox!
person Kaley
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
no no no no no. you can't leave me hanging here. I need more. soon. please.
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He should definitely try to get her pregnant... in debaucherous and fiendish and sexy draco-like ways!!!
I mean it's Draco for god's sake! He is a sneaky git!
nice tension opener though
good job!
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awww... I like possessive, manipulative Draco... Especially when he's all needy like this.
Good story.
=D

Also, he should try real hard to knock her up.
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omigah!! Is he actually thinking of doing what I think he's thinking of doing?? Naughty draco. Might as well propose to her first.
Up the duff... pft, that alex guy needs it up the ass if you ask me >.>
:-)
Other than that grousing I'm toooootalllly looking forward to the next chapter!
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! The first chapters were good and rather sexy, but you've turned it far more emotional and involved than just a sex-blackmail story. I really like how you show Malfoy as needing affection and a relationship, and how its shown in little things, like wanting to choose Hermione's clothes and so on. And, ahhh, Luna. Gotta love her. Please update soon, per favore!
person Anon
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione! Those idiots just don't know how good of a friend they're throwing away and can't tell that she's happy. Screw them! Excellent chapter! Cant wait for the next!