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i love your story so far update soon!!!!

The story so far is amazing. The way it's told is sweet and achingly tender. And the way you show how each is vulnerable emotionally is perfect as you do so without being sappy. The sexual tension is perfect. That was a brilliant start and I cannot wait to read more. Good luck and please update soon.

Lovely images. The only flaw in this tale is that, because it's at Hogwarts, and the woman is obviously young-ish(body wise) it's clearly a student, and he wouldn't just run off snogging and groping a student. But it's a nice story. Another setting might have given more scope for who the mystery woman was. Looking forward to the next bit.

This is a really beautiful story, and though i have never heard of that song, i am glad that it gave the idea for such an amazing story. It was emotive, and you described the characters wondefully. I can definetly see Hermione acting the way she did, and as for Snape, well the fact that he would be attracted to such an other worldly creature (as he sees her first time) and the mystery as to her identity.
I am a little surprised that Snape did not work out that it was a student, or at least thought about the big possibility that it is a student.
I really love this story, and i cannot wait to read more. All i can say is that it is beautiful, the very definition of the word in fact. I have not read a story before this, that could equal it in that respect.

very hot