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person Shellnet
schedule August 12, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Damn this was way too good to be  abandoned like that 

person Anon
schedule August 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
schedule November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God! Please continue. I love this! update more soon please! its very hot and he finally figured it out. Hurry hurry hurry!!!
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A cruel cruel place to leave your readers. But nicely done anyhow. Do hurry up and give us the next chapter.
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great sex scene!
person kim
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! I'm so glad you are working on this story again. I really love the direction this is going in. Keep up the great work.
person KraeHi
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh i must have more! It's bloody brilliant! please post soon!
person Anon
schedule September 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person crissy
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i really like this story so far! i would like to read more....
person Teri Lain
schedule September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i was so glad to see this up tonight. i really like what you have done with the story so far. omh gods, i was caught up in the moment and i thought they really were...but alas poor yorwick i knew him well. i will gladly put more thoughts to review if it will keep you writing. dont know if you have read any of ms. figg, but if you are looking for some good fics there is a place to go. here or at www.thebuningpen.com

lookin for more. :)