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for Fallen Angel

by alleycat88

person shadygrl
schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Poor hormonal incubus Harry! *laughs* Natural reaction, definitely. I liked that Tom and Draco are all agape at the thought of Harry being twice as alluring (that will be something to see!). I'm really curious to see how the getting-to-know-you phase will go. I can imagine Harry being bouncy and enthusiastic one moment, and sulky and petulant the next, with Tom and Draco just scratching their heads in confusion and trying to keep up. Fun chapter!
person Nikte
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think Harry
person alma
schedule December 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Your are awesome!!!
schedule December 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was so hoping the first baby would be Draco's.
schedule December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
really good story, I can't wait for an update. However I do wish it was HP/DM/LM.
person natasha
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
just letting you know your late AGAIN on updatin lol
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
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person shadygrl
schedule November 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the background to the fic is pretty complex! And I was nervous about Voldemort being included, but since he's more Tom Riddle-ish in looks and different in character because of his changes, I think it works. Now what will happen??
person shadygrl
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh, Lilith, I was so excited when I saw you'd written this story with 19 chapters already, so I dove right in to read.

I was going to read further before reviewing, but I just read Chapter Four, and Voldemort just showed up, and eeek! I hope everything will be okay. *worries and reads on*
person shadygrl
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
At Chapter 10 now! Possessive Draco coming in at just the right moment, though I love Hermione crushing on Harry and Ron wanting to run his fingers through Harry's hair. Some trio action, just because they can't help it, the poor kids, would be so cool. ^-^

And will Lucius be helping out Harry and Draco? If it's just H/D, that's cool, though I'll be curious to see how things unfold.