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for Fallen Angel

by alleycat88

person NightLo
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, 2 chapters in one row!!! Thanks for this!

Now, Harry has 3 protectors, 2 professors (Dumbledore and Snape) and 1 Malfoy family on his side (I am not sure whether other professors will get the potion or not)...he understands himself as well as Draco better...however, there is still ONE great threat hidden - Harry is horny!!! In my belief, he is kind of unstable, will this attract more admirations and attacks?

Also, will the ministry and daily prophet know about Harry's special condition soon??
person roni004
schedule September 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter i loved it how you incorpirated Ron and Hermione into the story as Harry's protectors. In my opinion it would be very intresting if ron and hermione could take mates and make demon children. Also i have to say your writing is improving with every you update which is good except that it was perfect when it started so i don't know what level it is now. And lastly all i got to sat is WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT FOR HORNY TEENAGERS!!!!!!!!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Short but good... :) hopefully draco will soon "feed" harry...another coming soon i hope ^_^
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it, love it, love it
Poor Harry. Hope Draco will feed him soon.
Can't wait for next chapter.
Please put me in your update list: My e-mail is satine1313@post.sk
person Nikte
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I love your story, it's so hot!!!!!!!!
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
brovo cant wait for the next chapter
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
weeee sweet..hope another chapter's up soon ^_^
person Jan
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh! This is going to be interesting. Can't wait to see how the student body is going to react to Harry.

Please update son. ^_^
person Nikte
schedule September 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a great chapter, I wonder how many more punches is Draco going to get, after all he, as well as Harry can